Jay WIP

A lineart WIP of one of the main characters in my Star Wars fanfic, Star Wars: White Snow.

This has to be my fifth attempt at this picture. Every time I try it, I get closer to getting it right, but there's always something that slows me down or screws up the entire picture. Last time it was the eyes. This time it was the lips. I think I've gotten it right so far, and I'm still working on it. But then again, I've been working on it for about three months now, so I'm not too optimistic about finishing it.

The model used for this picture is Odette Annable. I picked her for two reasons:

A) She fit the character almost perfectly, and

B) She has to be - hands down - one of the most beautiful women in the world.

I've got a ton of other pictures to finish up, so I don't think I'll get to shading this any time soon. When I do, I'll repost it.

Feel free to tell me about anything that isn't right. It would be very much appreciated, and it would help me to get the picture right next time.